The search for an exit begins

 

I read the note she left you.

 

You're cold as ice on a mountin top 

unreachable.

my fires lay burning and you cast yourself with curious castrations

her lips moist and seeping the language of love 

your frigid air does nothing to cool her molten desire 

you are a cruel and desolate love scape 

fierce fire and savage ice 

make for still waters 

this puddle is all I see

reflecting the deep chasm between us

you refuse to fill.

 

she signed it,

 

Yours sincerely,

Well Past Randy. 

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I don't know whether to be

I don't know whether to be sad that I can relate 

Or be glad I'm not alone in the atrocities of love. 

not sure but think I was involved with His sister

I know She had Ice in Her veins ......................

long story short I Like the piece

an I don't like anything


 ~ D D ~ 


Every story-teller bends the myth to his own purpose. that's why a Hero has a thousand faces

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...

Smoothie my dearest go find a star to colide with and forget Jack Frost! you'd just melt him and make a mess and then you'd need a mop...

 

<3 this was a fun read, in my head it was a romance between the sun and Mount Everest!


Much Love

Ashley

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I love your line: "Your

I love your line: "Your frigid air does nothing to cool her."

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fierce fire and savage

fierce fire and savage ice 

make for still waters 

this puddle 

is all I 

see reflecting the deep chasm between us

you refuse to fill.

 

Oh VERY VERY poetic, dear Ssmoothest.

 

This is the style I love

that you write in best.

*tingle tingle* fire and ice,

i won't say it very nice,

so I must speaketh the old english way,

so be it mine words not be taken as play,

sumptuous morsels of gentle thorns,

prick me softly...so sweetly adorned!

 

 

 

 

 


...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."

"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "

 

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Thanks beautiful, I always

Thanks beautiful, I always appreciate your comments like allets they are so worldly  and sometime so proundly real like running with rabbits comments and work I want to write comments but they need to be great comments you know evenly matched but I'm usually stumped... So silence is golden ;) hugss 


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's life SIMS, but not as we know it" - ¡$&am

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You just FINE. You are our

You just FINE. You are our post poems Ssmoothie and we love you!  ♥♥♥♥♥♥


...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."

"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "