The Universe IS profoundly daft

Running around

wielding love's righteousness like a sshield,

a hapless creature,

telling fortunes out of yesterday's soul whispers.

I'm lost.

I'm found.

The universe is profoundly daft.  

hope's illusion a mirage afloat.

Now you see it!

now you don't!

Yielding tides of time release their pain

straddled with its Siamese twin pleasure again.

no cringing for creation.

Never a thought of trepidation

or care if we're too unevolved to know the difference 

Between our selves and our existence.

Happy clash of serendipity,

I sincerely hope you stay afloat. 

 

 

Author's Notes/Comments: 

Yeah... TBa or not tba? That is the ?

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Oh yes it is...

Oh yes it is...


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

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The Universe...

Couldn't be anything but profoundly daft considering the rampant stupidity that comprises the majority of this tiny little realm in it.
Where else is psycopathy a curse, madness a gift, and sociopathy a ladder to the top?
Where else do the good die young, the wicked get fat, and the rest get left in the cold?

My dear Sylkie, you have a profoundly beautiful way of stating the obvious with such grace an eloquence. I admire that :)
And I've been missing it too


"Music is a universal language and needs not be translated. With it, soul speaks to soul" - Songsterr

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no the question what does tba

no the question what does tba mean? the answer is this poem?

 

:)

 

"Yielding tides of time release their pain

straddled with its Siamese twin pleasure again."

 

just brillaint! so true one does come without the other following close behind, and that is one of the MOST beautiful things about life, the eb and flow, up and down, clean and messy, :) just love those lines


Much Love

Ashley

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To be advised, or not to be

To be advised, or not to be advised? that is the burrowing  question...


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

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does the advice ring true to

does the advice ring true to your inner truth and soul?


Much Love

Ashley

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Yes well, do I tell someone

Yes well, do I tell someone thier about to crash through life or not? Some things are better left discovered rather than uncovered... ;) 


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

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:) well put my dear!

:) well put my dear!


Much Love

Ashley

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;-)

I love it! Totally Ssmoothieness!!!

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Lol, b trying to be normal

Lol, b trying to be normal when you're not has its headaches lol! Love that you love it b! Supper hugss! :D 


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

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this is seductively wrought

this is seductively wrought with allusions that are quite pretty, enjoyed ss ;)

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Awww thanks Bourkie! :D 

Awww thanks Bourkie! :D 


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

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Love that,

Love that, SSmoothie--'profoundly daft' It's true. So crazy to say those words together, both having equal weight when discussing the subject matter--'the universe'.


...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."

"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "

 

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;) I love that you get that!

;) I love that you get that! Hugss


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."