Sleepless

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Empty Hole

I've slept so long without



your touch



your smell



your eyelashes tickling my cheek



your lips



your arms



your breath on my face



your weight



your warmth



your dreams with mine



I've slept so long without



That it feels



I haven't slept at all

Author's Notes/Comments: 

i wrote this right after my first break-up with my soon-to-be ex...

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Richard Elliott's picture

Ah this is nice! Apart from the dread of break-up, this reads very nicely with a good rhythm that carrries through the some said thoughts of loneliness and longing.

Nice work,

Richard.E.