Fall of The Lizard Prince

My broken wings, a fallen angel has been born-
thorn apart from reality, quality as in fine wine,
my taste so bitter...

Depended on a religious creed to feed me
immortality- blasphemy against his spirit is not
forgiven, living condemned, disown by by father...

I can see Heaven from my throne, this heat never
slows- but time does and I'm in control, my own
Army I control, "Father, look at me now, this is what
I've become."

Welcome to the underworld, not much different than
yours...my name is proclaimed here and there, I'm
not a rare sight; a handsome devil in disguise.

Eternal flames keep me warm, yet my heart is too cold-
no remorse, I see a new Heavenly war, a battle for
Zion. All I'll get is a thousand years, but I'll run loose,
you'll lose!!

Discipline upon this earth shall be established, my laws
you'll obey, betray your father and brother, disobey your
mother, incest with the daughters...

I see the sinners, born-again leaders, and religious
fanatics everyday in this stinking world, agreeing and
disagreeing on what they know or don't want to...

I pity you all for being such fools, I'm whipping you with
my tale....WAKE UP!!! Sleep with one eye open, hoping
in your prayers that I'm lying...

While I contemplate my next move, try to figure me out-
I'm coming to get you. I might of lost a pair of wings, the
horns on my head are deadlier...

Frightening days are ahead, don't be alarmed is what I
say, just a friendly reminder from the one who is dead...
The Lizard Prince.

Author's Notes/Comments: 

A story of pain...

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Lori1025's picture

You are an amazing writter,

You are an amazing writter, especially since you are 112 years old according to your profile. Ha ha! Was that a typo or you just being weird?

ashes_twisted's picture

What Imagery!

You captivated me with your story.
So beautiful to me although painful.

These Lines:

"I can see Heaven from my throne, this heat never
slows- but time does and I'm in control, my own
Army I control, "Father, look at me now, this is what
I've become."

"Welcome to the underworld, not much different than
yours...my name is proclaimed here and there, I'm
not a rare sight; a handsome devil in disguise."

So powerful to me.
Brilliantly done.
=^.^=


"We are, Each of us angels with only one wing, and we can only fly by embracing one another." -Luciano De Crescenzo

Astral_Tides's picture

This topic is always

This topic is always fascinating to me. Very dark and menacing piece.
Extremely well written and a pleasure to read!


"The stars awaken a certain reverence, because though always present, they are inaccessible; but all natural objects make a kindred impression, when the mind is open to their influence." R.W.E.

 

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