Freedom Man with A Universal Mind

Your criticism encourages me to roam
free with a universal mind and a suit-
case full of razor blades...
Words written in scriptures upon scrolls,
left to the unknown.
Insanity has taken the children to the
house of the unholy...'the man who
put his boots on' led them there-
They belong to the Lizard Prince, he
feeds them rat poison, vinegar, and
sulfur...
Seduces women throughout the night;
when summer is gone, he continues
his freedom upon the earth, searching
for distant dreams and lost souls-
Nothing escapes his universal mind;
the messages between the lines are
encrypted...only those he posses
understand the meaning behind the
smile-
The Freedom Man is taking your wishes
and destroying your dreams, becoming
the life you only desired, and now
grows you tired and confused...
Dazed and amused at what is to come
from the universal mind of the freedom
man-

Author's Notes/Comments: 

I am the freedom man...

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SSmoothie's picture

Love it! Te freedom man...

Love it! Te freedom man... Means so much in so many ways awesome write! The razors, great line!


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

SoulKritiC's picture

to freedom...

humbled by such kinds words...


SoulKritiC