" Let's See The World "

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Spiritual



Stop what you're doing,

slowly drift with me.

Close your eye's now,

it's the world you're gonna see.

Imagine you're on the cloud's,

above the world so high.

Relax and feel the pleasure,

of the Lord's great sky.

Take a moment to stretch,

your limb's through the air.

Let the cloud's of creation,

handle you with care.

Now look all around you,

there's the world, to see.

A creation made from God,

for both you and me.

Is everyone behaving well,

the way our Father asked?

Or is most of them secluded,

behind the evil, of a mask?

Picture in your mind,

is your life the same?

And if the answer is yes,

then it's yourself to blame.

We often get lost in our life,

due to obstacle's in our way.

However we need to focus,

on our action's everyday.

Think very carefully,

at the next step you take.

Let God guide you through,

for His, Your's and Jesus sake!

Author's Notes/Comments: 

If you really think about it, the poem that I've created makes a lot of sense. All we have to do is take control of our life, and not let it get carried away by thing's that are of no use to us. Get saved, invite Jesus into your heart, and Love and cherish what God has gave to us.... A gift of life is the most precious gift that anyone can ever recieve. All we have to do is live our life by the way He intended. Help each other, if you see someone in need try, try, try, your best to help them. You can never tell; God may be desguised as a person you would never suspect. But keep in mind to always be careful, of the one's dressed in sheep clothing!!!!!!!!!!

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Nancy, Hmmmm, quite inspirational. I like the concept here, the sort of out of body experience that transcends the gravitational impact of the physical realm and allows you to float and view as if from the perspective of divinity.
The way in which you play spiritual introspection against the finite life form of the flesh opens the mind to a lot of neat insight.
Your summary of the work also adds an embellishment of your own virtue and the admonishment that borders on serious wisdom. ~Tim