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Water And Surrender
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Humility As water sought the lowliest
places into which
she poured
So into the surrendered God
has The Spirit poured.
As water sought the lowliest
places into which
she poured
So into the surrendered God
has The Spirit poured.
:)
I like this and I think I know why the other reader may have confused the sentence you were portraying. If "God" were on the next line or a "," were placed between surrendered and God, then perhaps it would more clearly convey that it is not God who is surrendered, more that into those surrendered, God has poured out the spirit. I really like this. It is beautiful and so true.
Dear Katrina, Thank you
I was trying to convey that as the sea
receives rivers because she lies lower than they
so do the humble and surrendered to the will of
God receive the waters of Spirit
This is an interesting piece and I think I may have grasped it's meaning, but I'm not sure...surrendered God, for example? I'm not sure about that...maybe you could explain.
~Kate~