Oblivion

twisting and turning

writhing into oblivion

sitting as i ponder

what is the meaning

too much

so little time

too many questions

not enough answers

there is a light at the end of the tunnel

hope

obstacles block my path

broken promises

unfounded theories

and a past newly unburied

for the soul to grieve over

tormented

my soul does not make it

the tunnel is my grave

oblivion

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Cyrus Soulstice's picture

Ooh. I loved this one, for sure. Very good use of vocabulary and connotation.

Sara Wright's picture

i like this one your very good. your poems tende to be sad unlike mine wich are usally angry lol well see you later hope to read more about you.