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Frozen
Frozen in time,
This moment's suspended,
Time is gone,
All the loneliness has ended,
Fluttering by,
The butterflies landed,
Heart pounding so fast,
I can barely stand it,
Time to fly,
And when I do,
Falling endlessly in the sky so blue.
Again, you have no problem composing a well written poem. Your diction could use a bit of polishing, and the flow of the poem could be worked on just a tad. Remember to count the syllables when you reread the poem outloud. Maybe no one does that but me. Oh well.