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I could feel the sun on my back for an eternity and still not know I am alive the way I did in the dark with you

Lost and crumpled spaces where I once existed in love thrown to the wind like dandelion fluff and all my wishes couldn’t grow into anything more than weeds anyway

Still I need you

Like calm blood in my veins and fresh air in my lungs

You complete me

And it’s absurd

Atrocious even

That I let you

But you do

And all the sun on my back and the poetry in my soul will be nothing

If I’m not sure I even feel it

If I can’t take it with me into the dark

If you complete me more than I do



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Beavis's picture

Wow!

the title was so unRabbit, but the poem so amazing, especially with the title! I suggest RR!

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:)

I use to be big into the one word titles back in the day, then I started with the last line-adds a new layer titles ;)

 

funny enough I am not a huge fan of this poem either... recommended reads you say? lol


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Ashley

Beavis's picture

You know you have the knack

You know you have the knack for slapping with forgotten memories;-) And the opening lines made me time travel!

running_with_rabbits's picture

:)

RR it is my dear...just for you :)


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Ashley

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Wuv it Wabbits!! The way your

Wuv it Wabbits!! The way your words flow always seems to work for me as a reader...


Copyright © morningglory

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waaawwww swucks healing woman, you always know how to make me feel loved! 

HUGS


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Ashley

life_used_to_be_lifelike's picture

Ahhh! Brilliant. Love love

Ahhh! Brilliant. Love love loved it. It really hit home, and i have felt that way many times. Good job miss rabbits :)


"It is a terrible thing to be so open. It is as if my heart put on a face and walked into the world" -- Sylvia Plath.

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:) Thanks Life

I am finding my philosophy classes are slowly seeping into my writing and cross contaminating ideas :) but I kinda like it to be honest :)

 

I love love love your new profile picture! Is that you? Its kind of nice to have a face to put with your words :)


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Ashley

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Haha that is in fact my ugly

Haha that is in fact my ugly mug. I feel the same, i wish everyone would post their faces so we could see eacg other!


"It is a terrible thing to be so open. It is as if my heart put on a face and walked into the world" -- Sylvia Plath.

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hold your tongue! ugly my BLEEP! you are beautiful!

 

I had my photo up for a while, but I am attached to my beer gutt bunny graffitti


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Ashley

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I do like your drunken bunny.

I do like your drunken bunny. But damn it I never did see your picture. :( have a wonderful day :)


"It is a terrible thing to be so open. It is as if my heart put on a face and walked into the world" -- Sylvia Plath.