Flames flicker out, stars go supernova, and love is just lust living the luxurious life

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I’ve fallen in-love with you

The kind of love that lies

The one that is only as deep as our shared breathes

In the way we don’t speak

Feel awkward

Have colliding morals, religions, and senses of humour

The kind of love that lets it be okay because we make love like planets dying

A star gone super nova

Bursting bright and large across the universe

Than a sudden flash of blinding light and all is consumed and gone

Blackness

The kind of love that leaves with age and libido

And the lack of new positions to explore

The kind that says I feel this like a broken body

Deadly desire in my soul

Like air will choke unless it’s first crossed your lips

Like love can be found in your eyes looking into mine when you cum

Like our love could last as long as you just did

I’m in love with you

The hollow kind of love that lies

And it sucks

Author's Notes/Comments: 

moved to RR just for beavis...

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tallsquirrelgirl's picture

LOVE this! real and

LOVE this! real and fantastic.


*tallsquirrelgirl* she feels in italics and thinks in CAPITALS ~henry james

running_with_rabbits's picture

:) thanks...I hate the last

:) thanks...I hate the last line and may remove it...thoughts?

 

like I am thinking it would be stronger if it ended at "like our love could last as long as you just did"


Much Love

Ashley

tallsquirrelgirl's picture

I do like that...or it could

I do like that...or it could end at "the hollow kind of love that lies." It's yours, write it till you're slightly okay with how it turns out, that's what I do :)


*tallsquirrelgirl* she feels in italics and thinks in CAPITALS ~henry james

running_with_rabbits's picture

:) thanks

:) thanks


Much Love

Ashley

SSmoothie's picture

incrdible and real, sensual

incrdible and real, sensual and teasing, blunt and soft at the same time. love the tensions in this piece! a cut above hugss. - still no time for the essays! soz. ss


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's life SIMS, but not as we know it" - ¡$&am

running_with_rabbits's picture

:0

thanks my dear

I finsihed that essay! Got an A, all is well, and sure enough, the fickle feeling felt is gone and all that is left as proof it was ever felt is this poem...


Much Love

Ashley

Beavis's picture

Wow!

OMG! This should be in RR just for the number of exquisite lines packed in here! 

running_with_rabbits's picture

hmmmmmmmm

I will think about it, I don't really like this poem, then again whenever I like it least and everyone else likes it I end up loving it in time....

 

also, thanks :) HUGS, I am always glad when you enjoy a read!


Much Love

Ashley

Beavis's picture

;-)

soulmating! I usually don't like mine that others do, and love the ones that others don't get ;-) I enjoy everything you write Dear! Its all good, but some of it is better than what I had to study in college. (Unfortunately, they usually seem to wait until most poets are dead for a while to recognize their brillance, but I love ya NOW!:-D

running_with_rabbits's picture

hmmm...

time to fake my death and be taught in college! jks

 

I am falttered, thank you :) I guess I should be focusing on writing more eh?


Much Love

Ashley

Beavis's picture

Yep!

But the world does tend to get in the way, doesn't it ;-)