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Do I ware broken on me like all the other women who have been hurt by someone they love? Can you see it in my eyes when I look at you? That despair so deep the whole ocean could be lost in my mind. Is it pent up in my shoulders, how they jump a little if you get too close? Or stretched across my hips, thumping loud and clear as I carry my lunch to my table? Do I ware broken on me like all the other girls who became one in three, or do I hide it so well that sometimes I fool even myself?

 

© Ashley Hynd, All Rights Reserved, 2013

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I wish I had huged back better now that I think about it

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last updated 16 May 2013 - 4:57am
©15 May 2013 - 8:24pm — running_with_rabbits
24 May 2013 - 8:42pm — SSmoothie
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Did some body say hug???

SIGN ME UP! This is a great write for any of us can relate to the thoughts and emotions here, I love the authors comments lately they just cap the work of nicely! Love this! HugsS! Hugss! Hugss! :D

Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

26 May 2013 - 5:33pm — running_with_rabbits
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:) thanks smoothie    I try

:) thanks smoothie 

 

I try to treat the entire page as the poem, the title is just as important, if not more important, than the content, and the comment is like the lines between the lines, the moment that didn't fit in but wanted to more than the fat kid bullied by he jocks :)

 

HUGS

Much Love

Ashley