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We parked over there
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2013 We stopped at the Tim Horton’s you and I stopped at last year
On our way back fromWindsor
After knocking on my aunts’ door to find she bailed with no word
The one onManning Road
Between her house and the highway home
We stopped there today
On our way back fromWindsor
And it’s funny
How I thought of it
Recalled us stopping there before
Guess you still linger in my heart
Crying “let’s get coffee”
This bugs me too
This bugs me too...but in a good way ;-) I think the title is perfect, fits the poem and both capture those instances when a moment, even seemingly trivial, from the past crowds out whatever is actually occurring in the present. I wouldn't change a thing ;-)
that is exactly what it was
that is exactly what it was Beavis, still I dislike the title ;)
Much Love
Ashley
:-)
I can see why you do, I but its perfect for the poem. It captures that thought/memory that slams into your brain and derails everything else. While it's not typical Rabbit, it is totally on point for me. ;-)
maybe that is exactly it! it
maybe that is exactly it! it does not do what most of my titles do, its not witty, or blunt, or in your face, or making no sense til the end of the poem and the 3 second dely of "what..wait..OHHHHHH" its just a title. perfectly adiquatte, bland, ho hum run of the mill title....thats why I don't like it :) seeeeee you get me
Much Love
Ashley
Hm.
Seems more of a speed bump then a good parking job,
or maybe you are like me,
and just half assed the parallel lines,
they aren't straight ya know?
We always tend to find ourselves staring back at that curve,
just up ahead,
counting down the seconds until you can get your three second chance of an imitational "bird"
(^-^)
I love the title!
We parked over there
It's what made me click on this,
and always, always, ALWAYS!! never disappointed.
<3
"We are, Each of us angels with only one wing, and we can only fly by embracing one another." -Luciano De Crescenzo
:) oh ashes you are too kind
:) oh ashes you are too kind to me :)
I am not pleased with my writing these days but it would seem everyone else is
Much Love
Ashley
Pssh.
You are who I come to when I need a good witty, kiss my ass, kind of read.
Your titles alone are enough to set me off,
and plus...I would tell you if something didn't fit with me..
I would say: "Ashley, I love you, but you need to fix this shit right here..."
(^.^)
"We are, Each of us angels with only one wing, and we can only fly by embracing one another." -Luciano De Crescenzo
:) a good witty kiss my ass
:) a good witty kiss my ass kind of read :)
so true
HUGS
Much Love
Ashley