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so I'm going on the donor list ****title may change******
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2012 My heart still hears his name in its hollowed echoes of love
In its flutter of winged kisses
It hears his romance
Plays his memories
Sweeping across its berating beats
Lingering like a hooker’s cheap perfume on a husband’s collar
My heart still hears his name when you kiss me
Title
What about 'False Fidelity?'
Or 'Voice of the Heart?'
I don't know; I've never had trouble with titles before and those don't sound too good to my ears. Too much thinking with not enough brain.
Anyway, great poem. I liked how striking it was, had a punch to it.
:) thanks
:) thanks
Much Love
Ashley
I like it!
I think it needed to be posted. The only thing is that I don't know whether "so I'm going on the donor list" should be the title because I don't see that being mentioned in the poem anywhere. I think a title could be "My heart still hears his name" or "Hearing his name" or something like that... nice write!
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I agree the title REALLY
I agree the title REALLY bothers me
Much Love
Ashley
As I said, I think leave the
As I said, I think leave the last line as the title and put the second last line last, it packs impact! HugSS
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
interesting, I do often do
interesting, I do often do that, that is often how I come up with those titles that you guys love, how did you know....
Much Love
Ashley
I like
"Berating Beats"
just a thought, and yes it needs to be shared it is haunting, in its
"echoes of love"
that is a good one too
Peace
Dylan
"One of the best results of life, is the torment of love"
Dylan Eliot
:) thanks Dylan it is always
:) thanks Dylan
it is always a blessing to get a comment from you
Much Love
Ashley