slope

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slope

 

Patterns in weathered stone

carry the same recursion

found in cloud‑break and thaw.

 

To speak of erosion

is to misread the work;

better to stand inside

 

 

the quiet fulcrum of the ridge,

the dense interior

where the shift is sensed first,

 

long before the slope gives way.

 

 

 

 

 

 

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deep and not what I expected.

deep and not what I expected. one of the better ones I have read on this site.

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Thanks, ramonathompsont.

Thanks, ramonathompsont. Normally, it's best to steer away from anything to deep but then again the reception isn't great either way. So now I don't know what I'm trying to say any longer. A thousand pardons. Smile


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