Skin Deep Pleasure

There should be a lie
Somewhere inside my promise
Hidden in a kiss

 

Author's Notes/Comments: 

It's a Haiku!

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ashes_theartofburning's picture

This is..

quite beautiful.

Well done!

(^.-)


"We are, Each of us angels with only one wing, and we can only fly by embracing one another." -Luciano De Crescenzo

redacediamond's picture

and here i thought you'd say

and here i thought you'd say sparta XD


Well perhaps women are better at waiting for love than men.

allets's picture

Attitude

is everything. Kisses as lie caches . . . how universal when insincerity defines a relationship ~ a view I have not seen in poetry so blatantly spoken without being disguised in cynicism or disgust. Bravo! ~~A~~