social use to full out addict

IM SICK!!!! I NEED MEDICINE QUICK!!!!

I NEED THAT FIX, I CANT WAIT A TIC!!

OR A TOK, IM STARING AT THE CLOCK

CAN'T TALK, BACK-N-FORTH I ROCK

 MY BODY'S SWEATING, IM COLD IM BETTING

MY FACE IS REDDENING, I GET HOT, BODY WETS THE BEDDING

AS I CRAVE THAT MEDICINE, ALL IN MY HEAD AGAIN

PERTRIFIED MAN I CAN, SEE MY STIFF LIKE A MANNEQUIN

AS I TAKE A TASTE REALITY BENDS, RETRACTS AND EXTENDS

IS MY HEART CONDEMNED? CAUSE DUDE IM FALLIN FOR MY BEST FRIEND

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readmy5tuff's picture

might as well be cough syrup.

might as well be cough syrup. got shut down again. i figured if anyone would like me for me it would be her but i guess i judged wrong

nightlight1220's picture

your formating is nice and

your formating is nice and the words flow really well.

~peace~

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...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."

"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "

 

jessie2376's picture

At first read i thought u

At first read i thought u were an addict on cough syrup or something...nice style...reminds me of a good rapper...but then again a woman can be more addictive than any drug

nightlight1220's picture

not to mention the burden you

not to mention the burden you place on the other person to satisfy all of your needs. why i didn't care for the poem too much.

~peace~

...............


...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."

"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "

 

readmy5tuff's picture

It wasnt supposed to be a

It wasnt supposed to be a poem about her fullfilling.what ever iwant it was a metaphor for how i feel without her like a withdrawl. she changes my mindsatate  in a good way. i do a lot foe her.

 

ashes_twisted's picture

*Swoon*

I agree with SS!~*grabs shirt collar* Don't muck it up!!!! (^-^)


"We are, Each of us angels with only one wing, and we can only fly by embracing one another." -Luciano De Crescenzo

readmy5tuff's picture

She doesnt wanna be with me

She doesnt wanna be with me she says her life is to tumultuous for that right now :(

SSmoothie's picture

She must have what you need.

She must have what you need. Tread carefully... 


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's life SIMS, but not as we know it" - ¡$&am

allets's picture

"...Reality bends, retracts

"...Reality bends, retracts and extends..."and then I float on so many levels. Enjoyed the extended metaphor, nicely woven ~~Lady A~~ 


 

 

readmy5tuff's picture

ya well we ended up sharing

ya well we ended up sharing some very steamy kisses but i guess her life isnt really ready for that right now. im sure thatll change when she sees a hot guy in class or something

SSmoothie's picture

We don't always crave what's

We don't always crave what's good for us... But we always end up realising what we need in the end. Hopefully not too late. Hugss 


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's life SIMS, but not as we know it" - ¡$&am