A hermit's confession

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PAPER PURSUIT
 
For those of you who read me or care
I feel a need to justify something here
That is this belligerent persistence
Bunched up roses decaying in a vase
Rehearsing these recurrent themes
Mystery manifest in misty mountains
Interrupting myself however I please
To free the rain from the hovering cloud
It pours on down and fixes my frown
Like the hermit of whom these words do tell
 
Author's Notes/Comments: 

Notes are nice sometimes

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saiom's picture

what did pungus mean

what did pungus mean



 

 

saiom's picture

'mystery manifest in misty

'mystery manifest in misty mountains'  exquisite

 

'bunched up roses decaying in a vase'   reminds

  me of G B Shaw

'i love little children but i don't cut off their heads and stick

them in vases' or

Sathya Sai Baba;  'Why pluck a flower and hasten its death'

 

'To free the rain from the hovering cloud
It pours on down and fixes my frown'      unusual and beautiful

 

 



 

 

patriciajj's picture

Your "belligerent

Your "belligerent persistence" is rare, metaphorical sorcery. All lines have a sassy, confident brilliance, but that last one: perfection. You rock! 

S74rw4rd's picture

The evocation continues: 

The evocation continues:  bravo!


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