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The cold winter sky is orange upon the horizon of red pine dunes

with a strip of white and then suddenly blue of a drowning hue.

The color of words is by no means dull but a winged ether, visage

of nymphomaniac time captured by a soul-snatching massage.

 

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I applaud and admire the way

I applaud and admire the way your language is so highly evocative; and what it evokes is always the supreme justification of the words you have chosen and the way you deploy them.


Starward-Led [in Chrismation, Januarius]

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Appreciated Friend

Thank you for the fine feelings provided by your care


peace, pot, tequila shot

Jesus loves us, stoned or not

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 'with a strip of white'

 

'with a strip of white and then suddenly blue of a drowning hue.'

Perhaps a sailor, one of millions drowned in war

or a fisherman's widow

*

'nymphomaniac time captured by a soul-snatching massage.'

 

!! Nymphomaniac time: always waiting for new girl babies to mature?



 

 

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I suppose you could say so

I was thinking time is always bred of itself


peace, pot, tequila shot

Jesus loves us, stoned or not

patriciajj's picture

If I want to read something

If I want to read something jaw-dropping, I come here and I'm never disappointed. First you present some stunning imagery that is almost supernatural, then you stun again with an astounding description of the ultimate bliss.

 

I was already tripp'n with "winged ether" when you hit me with "soul-snatching massage". I mean, Wow! When your pen is set free it goes places beyond most mortals' imagination. 

 

Always a pleasure and an honor to read you. 

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Ecstacy

One of the finest compliments I have ever received!


peace, pot, tequila shot

Jesus loves us, stoned or not

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''nymphomaniac time captured by a soul-snatching massage' 

women lie in wait like sirens ready to capture Ulysses!!!