Love,Be Free,Don't Fall

Don't fall for pleasantly sweet,

from Mr. Macho who appears

masculine, sexy and deep.



Outside/In are colours so bright.

Inside/Out are colours of night.

Mixture of colours throughout are right.



Listen closely,heed all the signs

learn his temperament,

read between the lines.



Guard carefully your person,

protect your heart and soul,

love,be free,ONLY,when he's the one.

Author's Notes/Comments: 

An answer to Hawksquaws'
"Glass House"
12/13/01

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Tim / manatee Marshall's picture

HEY sweet flower,please don't give up on me,and thank you for teaking my poems,two fingers with f-ing arthritis Y i don't need an excuse,a nice good advice poem,i'll have to check it out L&P

Miranda Rae's picture

Linda, This is cool! And a great answer to Renee's "Glass House" poem. Awesome advice in here. I especially like the second stanza.

HAWK SQUAW's picture

well thank you for reading my Glass House poem...... and for being so inspired to write an answer........ thank you so much...... your friendship and support in some things really helps me get through the day sometimes........ you always seem to be right there when I need a shoulder....... and that means so much to me...... once again I thank you for the poem........ as always a pleasure reading your work......... keep them coming Hawksquaw