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Jovial as the suns rays...

     Dancing upon the water.

Optimistic as the stars...

     Twinkling in the sky.



You rose to a better life.



Charismatic in nature;

Enabling a force far beyond reasoning...



     You control my every being.

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Tom Davidson's picture

Maybe no one else totally understood, but...you and I do. Thank you for your quotes of love and appreciation for a great person.

Violet Carolina's picture

The only line I had a problem w/was the last one...

Ashley Yocca's picture

I'm just wondering what exactly is that about. I really liked it, but I didn't understand it completely. I don't get a lot of poems, but most of yours I've understood. Please don't be upset with me for asking that.