The Voyage Eternal

Bright sparks, ideas, shining
Combining, kindling the fires of invention,
Soaring higher on wings created,
To the earth, no longer bound,
Bringing light, always moving,
To fill the void,
To cross all space,
Leaving behind blue skies everlasting.
Finding what is new,
Following the drive,
To seek the truth, hidden in lies,
Gazing upon stars, our eyes in wonder,
Forever burning, forges of gods,
And now for man, their energies serve,
Reshaping the universe.

Author's Notes/Comments: 

My first poem.

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joarth21's picture

thumbs up!

pretty deep for someone your age! you got skills

keep on writing!


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I really like this one because, up until the last 5 lines, it seemed like as I read the tone became faster and faster and that's how I was reading it too, and then it slowed down and was telling where it was
It was good I like it!

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Thanks! That really made my

Thanks! That really made my day! Or night....i'm not really sure what time it is at the moment, but yeah....thanks.