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* Chilling Mist *
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Exotic Love Poems rain and snow
two of the best
mixures made to
blanket the whole entire earth
i love the way the slush coats my hair
and chills against my skin , as the
rain drops tickle my breast as
the snowflakes drip off and disappear as
it dribbes down the side to cool off my thighes
the power of our elements combined together for
a chilling mist that we could not resist not to miss .
* i wrote this poem *
Beautiful, suggestive imagery here. Compressed, but sensual. Though the "elements" seem cool, the overall feeling is one of warmth, especially in the last couple of lines.
Keep working on such suggestive images!
Very sexy yet romantic at the same time. I likes:)
sorry this took so long to respond, appreciate your comments on my poem,