* Striking Lighting *

                  i was wisked away onto



               the distance where a almond



             enchanting prince stole my heart



            the power of his hands formed light

  

          ing bolts & a strange rain that poured

          

       & rocked down upon the whole entire earth .



        his charming ways made me speachless every



              time that we saw   each other the



            words i wanted to say got all mixed up



        into my mind leaving me dazzed & tongue tieded



    

      so  when i said hi to you my slurred speach got

          

       the best of me, i could not deny u were so fine .



  

     my babes soft cherry lips i could not wait to kiss



       it was this fellas sweet & loving arms  that i



     could not wait to return back home to every night .

  

  



              * this poem is all mine *

              

                

Author's Notes/Comments: 

it was striking lighting
that made me fall in love with the love of my
life we atomically conne
ted to each other and it
was beautiful then & now
it is more beautiful now
more then ever right now
God truly blessed me  and he will bless other
people to i just know
have faith & never give up on love because it is
truly out there   :*)

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Becka Zeits's picture

awww, so touching

passionaterider's picture

I love lovepoems, and this one is filled with a special love you have for someone, the kind of love that makes you tremble... *smile* Brian...