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            my sensual body was swept



        into your strong and loving arms

        

       you are a vistor that was unknowed

        

        that had woken me up from my sleep



        you'd creep thru my windows for a

          

      juicy bite of my sure delight, I am the

        

     red tasty wine that was so divine to you



     as  you take your sweet & lushious lips



      to mark me as your bride for all time   .

      

          

          *  this poem is all mine  *  

Author's Notes/Comments: 

this poem is about a
vampire that marks his
bride of his life i love this poem because it is
not only about not only
about vampires it about
sharing the rest of your
life with a dark prince
and you and him both share the gift of an
   after life .

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©18 August 2004 - 6:35am — poetvg
22 July 2005 - 6:55pm — Yvonne Coleman-Burney (not verified)
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"Very Nice Piece"........ Loved the word play and the heartfelt emotions of feeling intimate with someone and feeling as one in love.......

5 April 2005 - 9:30pm — Ashlee Thais (not verified)
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I love this poem...not only because of my Vampire fetish, but because of the darkness underneath it all...here I thought I was the only one who has an OBSESSION with the Immortal Damned.... :)

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9 September 2004 - 12:12am — Notorious Writer (not verified)
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Smooth and steady flow. It's nice, I like it.