* Ariel *

    i was resting into a chamber underneath the sea

           as the bubbles cool down my skin

              as it relaxes my wavy hair ,



           as the water sinks into my dress

          as my legs turn into colorful fins

          i awake and the fishes and dolpins

          help to set me free, because i am

         now a beautiful creature of the sea .





      *  I wrote & copy wrote this poem by myself *

            



        a mermaid with a lot of cool freinds  .

            

Author's Notes/Comments: 

this poem is about a
princess  that gets caught and sent to her
watery grave and as she
is there . her body   changes forms and she
becomes a mermaid for
the rest of her life .
the doLphins and the fish
save her and set her free
from her watery grave aND
she awakes and swims with
the fish and dolphins because she is happy to
be a creature of the sea

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patriciajj's picture

You created a serene and graceful transformation . . . an enchanting snapshot of a timeless story. Really love’n this! Beautiful work. Patricia

Shashi Krishna's picture

Great rendition there. Almost a song like composition. Well written and keep up the good work!