* Grim Reaper *

              you came back to this earth

              for souls to take you snatched

              my great uncle and my cousin

             who were not even sick in health

             right in front of my very eyes

             I didn't even get the chance to

             weep you left my family in tears

             and fears . I know for a fact that

             you will be back to crack and stir

                up ell for all eternity .

              

             * this poem is all mine *

Author's Notes/Comments: 

this poem is about the
Grim Reaper he steals
and souls and takes them
back down to ell all that
i know is that it is not
heaven and that is bad .

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This one is thought-provoking...but not at all Biblical...i assume you know that....?
The 'grim reaper', or like on 'touched by an angel', the 'angel of death' is nowhere to be found in the Bible! God knows the span of our life from the moment He gives us life! I know it is devastating to lose someone you love, especially to see it is very painful, but i hope you will know & trust that God is in control, & He has a plan for every life!
We are also promised we do not have to fear death, & that we do not have to grieve as the world grieves...i hope your uncle & your cousin knew Jesus, too!
Have you read the book of Revelation yet? The power of death is NOT going to be for all eternity, it is the last enemy to be conquered, when Jesus returns, we will never have to lose our loved ones again! He has already conquered death, & hell, for those who believe!
I really enjoy your writing style, you have a way with words that is very image-evoking, but i just wanted to share this with you, as one believer to another!
~Anastazia~