* Avil Lavigne*

                    you go girl

                   you speak those

                   words that are

                   so cool im no fool

                   your lyrics are tight

                   as a star light shining

                   across the sky i admit

                   im a fan of your work

                   because your style is

                   nice. you can take a bite

                   out of the whole world

                   i hope you win the new

                   artist award because i

                    know you deserve it .



               *  this poem is all mine *

Author's Notes/Comments: 

i like your music is
tight keep writing avil
you ve got one satisfied
customer here ciao for
now and keep on writing.

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blackcat2's picture

I like Avril too but more for her voice. There is a newer up and coming young lady that has an impressive sound. I can't remember her name just now but I can pass the name onto you when I do. I think you would like her music too. :-) Anyway, I really liked this. It is nice for an artist to get credit from a fan like this for their hard work.

CHRISTIE FELTY's picture

interestingly enough i also have great respect for this young girl. again very nice piece.
peace
~jaded

Corey Fox's picture

my only comment is that i'm big on spelling, and i think You spelled her name wrong - good poem
one love Corey & co

Chesty Le Roux's picture

um first up its avRil. you forgot the 'R'.
and second. dont take this personally, because, well, its her i hate, your poems are good...
BUT
jesus the girl doesnt even write her own songs, just because she wears a tie and black eyeliner doesnt make her any less manufactured than britney or christina. shes simply a pawn for The Man, despite what she likes to think. shes no bad ass, shes just a little girl on puppet strings with her eyes closed.