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* Endless Pain *
I say a totally diffrent
side of you. my freind
was totally right about u.
i just can not take the pain
any more. it is too much to bear.
i told you i would not ever leave u
but after what u put me through you
gave me no choice, i was out numbered
crying myself to death with an endless
headache that would not ever go away .
maybe we are better off apart . i
gave you more of myself than any
other woman ever would give to you .
this pain is killing me emotionally .
spiritually , and physically .without
you in my life i feel like i can not
ever move on ouch it hurts so much.
* i wrote this poem when i was depressed :*( *
this is a great poem...i like it very much so...: )
I like how it flows, nice
The mere emotion of this poem is greatly felt. I'm young, but I know love and heartbreak. I feel for you.
So much heartache and so much pain...but such is life. Good job with this one.
What a touching release of pain and expression. This piece is a familiar story of most women here and everywhere....thanks for sharing....Cover
i really like this one, good job
I really liked this poem. I'm here, feeling this now, with a marriage, that was all nothing but a joke. So I can relate to the feelings on this one! Good job!
Angie
so real and full of
deep sorrow.your poem reveal the complex in human emotion.
thank you for visit my web and leave words there.
english is not my first language,so you can help me a lot
will you?
Another lovely, tho painful write.. Jenni
The feeling here is
so real and full of
deep meaning through
life - that which we
painfully experience.
And are healed through
purgation of pent up
emotions - learning
and moving on - while
looking up to our
Saving Lamb of Calvary -
in whose arms burdens are
lifted indeed!
Ugonna