* I'm So Very Sorry*

               Babe the last thing

               i wanted to do was

               lie to you the way i

               did but you took ever

               ything so seriouslly

               about me babe i was just

               joking that night but

               before i realized it

               was far too late now

               im miserable without

               you and i truly do miss

               you i wish i could fix

            things beween us in the future.



        * this poem is definelty written by me  *

Author's Notes/Comments: 

this poem is about
a situation i had with
my boyfreind it was
such a terrible event
im suprised me and my
boyfreind stayed together

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Casa Nova's picture

Love can conqour any obsictle. Especially confusing and words that arn't ment. Its just a manor on how you put it to use. And you and your boi, seem to know how :) Touching poem.

Gary Mills's picture

There can be no worse punishment than to ask for and NOT receive "forgiveness". Nice work.

Laura Campos's picture

I understand you on this poem
I've been through the same thing
I really hurt my boyfriend
By saying something I was not suppose to say
And now he doesn't want to forgive me
It's really hard for me beecause I love him so much
And i'm happy you and your boyfriend stayed together
I wish you the best with him .:)

Andreas Andreou's picture

Very nice poem! Reminds me of one situation that happened in my life. :)

Zach Jacobsen's picture

It's serious people that make things bad!!!! And yet childishness will make you seem stupid....is there an inbetween? Hmmmm.....oh sorry! I liked it ^^ On to poem #6

shawon1982's picture

so.... you also have a boy-friend? ha ha ha..... this really made me laugh!


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marfiliyn sturner's picture

written from your big kind heart

Daniel P.'s picture

I like this poem...and thx for the comments on mine...

TheHouseOfR's picture

I know of days like this

saiom's picture

a very honest poem..
a very honest poem