Bad Construction

 

Bad construction.

Slow production.

 

And you can see,

The very evident flaws.

In the walls,

And in the halls.

What was the cause?

 

Bad construction.

Slow production.

 

Poor planning.

Bad handling.

 

And all the temperature issues...

Brrr! Even in spring.

It must be the new thing.

And the new theme.

To freeze,

All of everthing!

And everyone!

 

It's like a gigantic freezer.

And all the inhabitants are just chunks of ice,

And frozen contents.

Isn't that nice?

What has happened to common sense?

The cold is so intense!

 

I wonder who,

Thought that through?

I say no one.

And it's true.

 

Bad construction.

Slow production.

 

 

 

Author's Notes/Comments: 

About my High School building.

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I love the first stanza, and

I love the first stanza, and the rhyme scheme. :)