I love you so much,
I don't know why,
missing your touch
just makes me cry.
I wish there was a reason why
I dream of your face,
something viable makes me trace
the way I miss your embrace.
This hurts so much,
I miss your touch
it must be love
from up above
Nothing else could be worth it.
Except now you heard it
the ball is in your court
this mission must not abort
please cooperate
that would be great
think I said more than enough
for you to get the gist of this stuff
Author's Notes/Comments:
This is my rewrite on LaRae's poem at Stab entitled You're Worth It and she is so totally worth it she inspired two poems out of her one....amazing inspiration, thanks LaRae....your poetry pal, Pam PS I always do my best to give credit where credit is due whenever I can pinpoint the inspiration and LaRae's poem was totally the inspiration for this one...so thanks LaRae and if you don't like it in anyway let me know and I will delete it...Please excuse the necessary info cuz this poem belongs to LaRae I just kind of embellished it in my own way and hope she likes it and if not will take it off this site on the spot...as soon as I hear what she thinks or she can comment and I will leave it as is up to her...anyways...these are her thoughts I just made more in my own style more rhymy cuz she said she felt like she lost the rhyme...but it would have come in time...just kind of trying to help it along the way...Hope ya like it LaRae...
If you want my take on this one with my rhymy poetry stuff I will give it a go cuz you go girl!
here goes my take on your take and hope you get it and love it as much as I loved your original even if it didn't rhyme all the way...so what....this one is sporadic but tried to be true to the rhymes as much as possible to get the same message across...here goes...
thanks,Pam
Hey, I'm a day late reading this one. Nice little stroll of a poem. Where's the original one?