THE CHEESE CLOTH AFFECT

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JOURNAL # 41

maladjusted might
makes headlines right away
demystified myth
a crushed daisy in the palm of
penance
'The Cheese Cloth Affect'
for the Anglican Church of old
perhaps
restoration of belief
anchored to the decaying moral compass
of its patron's and their willingness
to evolve beyond the original scope
of their environment's foundation
intangible treasures submerged in
murky flesh
self lifted to the forefront of exposure
via careful reflection and self analysis............
(Nov. 17, 2012 1106pm)

Author's Notes/Comments: 

I was contemplating spirituality and religion and our each individual upbringing and how all that factors into who we are and whom we become good or bad. This poem was born of all that contemplation.

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Easter Quality

I'm getting renewal - rebirh, the possibilities of redemption and bliss - feel like I've been to church - an indepth search is mandated here - beneath (inside) the murky flesh - Lady A


 

 

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Sorry for delay in thanking you but I have to say...........

as I re read your comment just now I am never disappointed in how you word your critiques. You write them out with such an old worldly charm of word construction  to them. I simply love that Lady A. Thank you for blessing my work with a read by you. Most Sincerely, Melissa