'Autumn Rebel'
with your lover's moon
in your poignant rhymes
how you so sensuously swoon
with mystical allure
you siphon a heart to bleed
in your words
ache takes form
as if it were mannered aristocracy
through ancient angles
and endearing norms
you calm the soul
even as you
send your storms
via your rushes of love
and your torrid melodic
I am but a chained heart beat
who is forced to throb
as its own blood races
I think for each other
we quite twistedly confuse
you, the loving gardener
grow all things beautiful
where as I am but just one
hot house bloom
and from your purely tender
supportive gaze
one cannot expect you to
see through the fog of
your bias' haze
for true love blinds all sight
with the perfect strength
of the heart's tireless might
and in so tenderly speaking
the world forgives you of
this faultless flaw......................
(April 4, 2011 134am)

Author's Notes/Comments: 

another poem written nearly 3 months ago for someone I was protecting but now time has pretty much insulated him and so I can post this poem without any worry or censure..........

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This poem moves me like most of your poetry does :) Splendid -- to say the least.

Muhammad Naveed Ahmed.

Pen name:Emmenay.

Yahoo email ID:Ambitious7

Initials: M.N. Ahmed.

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The Fautless Flaw

Ahhh...the fautless flaw. Love poems should be like this always - with both sides of the emotional coin sides-up - Wow Dow, Lady!- yours in writing, Lady A