OF A TEARY ON LOOKER #

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JOURNAL # 38

such sharp words ye says
and to a sea that loves you
she accepts your troubles
and weary presence
complains nary
all while showering her
God given peace
and tranquility
upon the eyes ears and
shoulders
'Of A Teary On Looker'
so, I say be more tender
and respectful sir
to the blessed beautiful sea
otherwise her churning tides
and frothy crests
may turn to one night haunt you
hmmmmph........ tell me then
Mr. Bitter Words
just where would you be............
(May 15, 2010 659am)
 

Author's Notes/Comments: 

my poetic reply/critique of fellow post poems poet Muhammad Naveed Ahmed's poem Anything'

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