MENTAL TRAIN WRECK(INSPIRED BY FREDERICO USING THE LESS IS MORE CONCEPT)

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JOURNAL#23

            





one endless track

landscape

swiftly unveiled

lonely railroad crossings

streak by

scattered derelicts

of another era

amused

by their own

waterless filth

a conductor's hell

and playground

combined

pushing out

those who couldn't

wouldn't

pay pittance

to roam the plain's

longest rail

so few warnings

whistle the onslaught

of approaching disaster

no payment

means

no free ride

only diligence

remains

the truest dismissal

in one's deeper fears

of failure.......

(Feb.12,2000 9pm)





                  

Author's Notes/Comments: 

using the less is more attempt!

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