AS ARE YOU

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JOURNAL # 41

the thirsty atmosphere
drinking the rain from
the earth and pavement
is a glorious sight to behold
'As Are You'
a winter's day spontaneously bathed
in the sunshine's unexpected warm breath
captivates the flesh
as do you
sparkling misconceptions
ring like bells throughout the canyons
of crisis
same as your ability too
whispers wrap their arms around thoughts
too afraid to let themselves be fully shared
not wholly unlike you
utterly sonorous and sweet in lyrics
melodies meet
as so does your mellifluous voice do
a candle for a lover's riddle
that's all I ask
fit two times Tom Diddly Dee
perhaps some punch as you peddle
water's purchase for a dry grass tea..........
(May 27, 2015 214pm)

Author's Notes/Comments:

I was at first comparing a great love with some wonders found in nature and in the end was asking for some warmth and tenderness for the solvency of one's affections but for the price of a small riddle in return. I'm not entirely certain if the riddle was worth the appointment of the words commissioned but I liked the general scheme of the placements.