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critiques and comments A poem somebody that signed my poetry guest book!
I saw the message
You lefted in my
Guest book. And
I didn’t even notice
Your name I’m not
Sure I would like to
Know your name
From the sound of
The rude message you
Wrote me you sound like a cruel
And harsh person to me anyway!
I only said that your poem
Didn’t make sense to me.
And I ask what the meaning of
Your so called poem was?
Because I didn’t understand it that’s
All I said. I didn’t mean to
Hurt your feelings by the
Comments I made.
And I never said that your
Poetry was bad in anyway or anything.
And yes I realize that poetry doesn’t always
Have to rhyme but if you like music you should write
Songs! not just bands and songs! And put a little more emotion into it like your body’s flowing with the music,
Each and every time you hear your favorite songs! As far me writing
something constructive
“As you say” my poetry must be okay my poems
were published by several different publishing companies! So you say whatever you wanna say about me I really don’t care what people say or think of me I’m just me lory I just write for fun anyway!
I think I understand what you are saying and feeling here like I wrote a poem called Advice after I posted a few of my poems at the message boards and some people were just trying to tear apart my poetry...so no more of that for me...it is what it is and that's all it is...if they like it fine, if not, they don't have to read it...nobody is forcing them...but u should check out my advice poem cuz I think we have the same message to share...anyways...please check out some of my poetry too and comment on how it made you feel and if you liked it or not...I appreciate anything anyone says...I also did a poem called How Rude that might relate to this situation....pam