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ends with the letter...."break"
sitting here watching
its a kodak moment
loving tonight
kissing no one
wishing i had someone
right now
the house is so cold
im calling you
at 4 am
just to see how your doing
im shaking
and im scared
that things are going
to fall apart
Short, simply, sweet in one word sensational
i love the way this poem speaks to the reader
and whisper hidden fears and emotions
that is bought out in a single moment
a nugget of gold
~~Christina~~
This poem beautifully captures things that I have felt in the past and expresses them as well as I could ever hope to. Thank you for writing it.
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Well expressed reality piece of ones wants, needs and desires. I could feel the sadness coming from the words, but I'm sure joy came in the morning...Cover Girl
wow, have i been in this situation....such expression...i like this...very good
Who has not felt this way. This is a beautiful piece that I can relate to.
RaiLa
This was great. It's funny how a situation can be caught so precisely on "paper". True feeling expresed.
I like this do to the writer was stronge ebough to face the facts ...
Hey, I love this poem. I really do. I think it's great. Keep up the good work. You have a unique writing style, and I like it!
~*~ Jill ~*~
I think we've all been there. It's a lonely, scary time when we don't know shy our significant other has forced desolation on us. We don't know if it's permanent or temporary. We don't know much of anything. We just have questions.
You've very ably described the situation. I really liked this poem. It was obviously written from personal experience.
This poem is so full of emotion. You have really painted a portrait of your feelings. Great job. And thanks for sharing. ms
What I think you should do to this poem is describe why things might be falling apart, but it does sound like this poem means alot to you and it is a really nice one also. ~SARAH~
simple, poingant and to the point....4 am calls...oh yeah...
i liked it. nice and simple, but sweet as well.
hey Molly, your poem is a very good poem about broken hearts. I enjoy writing poems about love too and some of them are also about broken hearts. You should read some of mine and see what you think of them.
Love always Jamie.
Wow... very well done.
I know how you feel, and i really like this poem!
Love
Crystal
Good poem my dear I hope to see more of ur work in the future. I am a poet too my first book was published in june
Poetry of the soul by James Daniel Darr
I also run a small poetry group on msn if ur intrested
Darr
you're, not your
I hope you have better Kodak moments to come. Life can be scary sometimes, but the worst thing that ever happened to me turned out to be a blessing in disguise. Maybe you'll have the same kind of turnabout.
Regards,
Jessica AKA
aww,molly, you got the poem of the day. way to go, i had never read this poem of your but i really really really like the title.
Very interesting.
It will never break but strengthen with a bit of time which will clear doubts the cause clearly understood. This is the abstract message I get from this poetry. Thank you.
sad and poignant...
The more I see this poem form, the more I like it: Shorter,
even 1 to 2-line verse. It was as if the lines were designed
to cause my breathing to pause on its own, before jumping on
to the next line. Nice, Molly.
kissing no one
wishing i had someone
and im scared
that things are going
to fall apart
I know killer. so true.