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"dont write about the things you know"



trying to hold your head above

the crashing waves



trying to crush your monsters

in the closet



i'm writing you a song to sing

you to sleep each night



im trying to make you happy

"but your sobs are so hard to face"*josh*

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thanks josh for the idea of this poem and the last line of it....my friend is kinda sad and has a problem and i cant help and i hate it i wanna help...sigh

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last updated 11 October 2010 - 11:35pm
©8 November 2002 - 2:51am — oh_so_odd
8 November 2002 - 7:06am — Josh Glasgow (not verified)
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Ah, you are very welcome, Molly. Very welcome. Also, the "holding your head about the waves" things is kind of in my poem, too. But that's beside the point. The point is that I'm glad that I inspire you, and I hope that you and your friend are okay. I want you to have a good life. You deserve it. If there's anything I can do, just ask me.
Good poem, by the way.

trying to crush your monsters
in the closet

Very nice. Keep on, shine on.