where,Was, Or,or??

where did i hurt you?

Was it your heart

Or maybe your soul



where did i scar you?

Was it your bleeding eyes

or your pounding head



where did i leave you?

Was it behind the barn

Or maybe under the deck



where did i find you?

Was it in a dumpster

or your own little world



where did i tell you i loved you?

Was it in your dreams

Or even your fantasies



where did i cry for you?

Was it in the myths

or maybe in the legends



where did i miss you?

Was it in my heart

Or even in my mind



where did you hurt me?

Was it in my soul

or maybe in my mind



where did you scar me?

Was it on my wrists

Or even on my throat



where did you leave me?

Was it in my car alone

or maybe on my porch



where did you find me?

Was it on the corner

Or maybe in someone elses bed



where did you tell me you loved me?

Was it in MY dreams

or even MY fantasies?



where did you cry for me?

Was it in wishful thinking

Or maybe in subtle dreams



where did you miss me?

Was it in your heart

or even in your mind



where did everything go?

Was it all a lie

Or maybe just a nightmare

View oh_so_odd's Full Portfolio
nkorinko's picture

Amazing. Simply brilant, I really love this. I love how it shifts focus from "You" to "Me"


The only problem with the story carved on your chest, is its hard to read when your missing your ribs..

Marianne Chrisos's picture

wow, this is quite good.