reflect you

 

....

It felt so good to be

A ripple in the shining sea,

Keeper of the clouds,

The river that sustains the bloodflow

Of human nature on the earth...

...water.

 

It felt so good 

To bounce in time 

With the phases of the moon,

Like batting lashes upon the chest

Of a million warm pectorals

No armor needed,

Because they have the light from you.

 

And then I became aware 

I was a reflection.

 

 

Ah yes.. it felt so good.

 

.....

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48daniel's picture

This is outstanding! I really

This is outstanding! I really loves reading this poem. Your such a great writer

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Thank you 48. Well...great?

Thank you 48. Well...great? I'll be gracious I suppose and say thank you. 

 

Thank you, and thanks for commenting too!

.♥


...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."

"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "

 

eternalpoet1389's picture

Great poetry!! I loved the

Great poetry!!

I loved the prose:

And then I became aware 

I was a reflection.

 Ah yes.. it felt so good.

Keep up the great work!

nightlight1220's picture

Thank you so much...great

Thank you so much...great compliment considering the source, sir. Thank you, kindly ♡♥♡

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...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."

"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "

 

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It looks so good to see that you are you and your reflection is just your own.

Ben

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Thank you Ben. What a nice

Thank you Ben. What a nice thing to say. I was just in the midst of making comment on your new poem, "mind, the culprit". Very much enjoyed reading it. 

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...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."

"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "