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The Horror Inside Me
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Diary of a Misanthrope Take a look inside my mind
I promise you won't like what you see
My mind is full of pain and chaos
Sorry I'm not too kind
I speak the truth, that's just me
I live with this horror everyday
The hate consumes my mind
Yes I wish it would just go away
But somethings I just can't leave behind
My skin is pale
The lies I lied
My eyes are turning blue
The tears I've cried
I gave him my heart
My soul has died
My lips are red
Ii kissed him too many times
I look into the mirror
I see my reflection
The ugly girl I see
The one he can never fear
The love that will never be
My heart is broken
But I am not weak
I only grow stronger
The war inside my head
I just want to kill that weak little girl
I think she'd be better off dead
I think I'd be better off, if she's dead
I like the emotion here. It speaks as though someone was badly hurt. Like their heart was broken to the point of no return. I think it offers great effect, and the wording is extremely emotionally compelling.
new_wave_franky
July 27, 2009.
Your poetry is great. I understand that hatred you speak of.