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12 points Cold, so cold; frozen crystal bones
sheathed in dirty drapery
scabbed and all alone
your warm breath curls around me
melt into a puddle of eyes and skin
obliterate my structure
yet I crave you with every fiber of my being
every cell vibrating violently
trembling I reach for a moon I'll never touch
yet I'm showered by its lying light
glinting softly in the darkness
a lone snowflake falls
intricate beauty unparalleled
yet no one can see it
fated to join the whitewashed masses
or be destroyed in a moment of joy
which am I to choose?
Numb, so numb; frosted skeleton
falling through a sullen sky
under a wintersun.
OH!
Mr. Poofs!
You have masterfully crafted a favortite for me, and MY GAWD! what an elegant piece of writing!
"trembling I reach for a moon I'll never touch
yet I'm showered by its lying light
glinting softly in the darkness"
So graceful, and tasteful!
"Numb, so numb; frosted skeleton
falling through a sullen sky
under a wintersun."
When I exhaled after reading this there was a vapor that had left me.
I felt the withdrawn cold.
Ah, my friend you are just simply...Brilliant.<3
"We are, Each of us angels with only one wing, and we can only fly by embracing one another." -Luciano De Crescenzo
Thanks ashes. I think this
Thanks ashes. I think this one turned out pretty well. Sorry I dont comment on yours enough, I never really know how to accurately portray my impressions and dont just want to say 'this is great!' every time...idk. Ill try.
Awesome works as well,
Awesome works as well, ^_^
and I'll accept any retorts that are of equal value. ^.-
I understand, and it is all good.
It means more to me that you take the time to read it than to comment. <3
"We are, Each of us angels with only one wing, and we can only fly by embracing one another." -Luciano De Crescenzo