Make you proud

You walk through the doorway
A suitcase full of hopes
wan smile and a wink
fears are blown away
and wash down the sink
grab my hand and give me
a packet full of pride
color in the blanks
breaking down the walls
your countenance frank
titanium wings spread
plasma cannons fire
destroying all the asteroids
that threaten our existence
leaving us a void
in which we are to grow
foster all your hopes
shining light on spectres
banish their smiles
give them a lecture
I walk in your shadow
loving the shade
soon I'll touch sunlight
shine brighter than diamonds
light your way
to a golden throne of victory
hold your ruby sceptre
lord over your kingdom
the grandest dynasty
one could ever dream of
impart to me knowledge
deepest of virtues
line my path with gold
though I may stray
you wont leave me sold
to slavery of vice
or lonely abandon
my greatest comrade
in an indifferent world
my cranial distad
part my seas of sorrow
I step to dry land
and leap to the clouds
exospheric liver
Just to make you proud.

Author's Notes/Comments: 

for my pops

View mrpoofs's Full Portfolio
Moonshadow's picture

This is so good!

Your Pops ought to be proud!!!


Dont look for me, I'll find you ~Moonshadow

SSmoothie's picture

WONDERFUL!!! really, really

WONDERFUL!!! really, really wonderful! :) great job!


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

allets's picture

I Want To Say

...something profound, so I will say,

 

"PROFOUND!"

 

~~A~~