Steps Of Success

I'm still moving even when my odds are low.

Everyday perseverance is what I show.

My talents always grows from everything I wrote.

Finding my position in this occupation hope my entry is a go.

Patiently waiting to make it as a poet.

Hoping anyone takes notice in my poetry.

Also my other abilities everything I do is helping me in my future to be.

Success don't come cheap every step there is a fee.

And I took so many steps I'm on a shopping spree.

Pens and pads in my book bag when I have brain attack..

I'm ready to jot down my thoughts asap.

Using all my of my work as a road map to success.




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a.griffiths57's picture

    Sounds like a good plan



Sounds like a good plan in life. Well written poetry and a good read.

palewingedpoetess's picture

I read all that you posted .............

It sounds like you are on the right track. Not sure if you want true criticism if so it is mostly a few minor grammatical errors that could be corrected that would clean up your poems. Just let me know and I can go over them again and point out the little gaffs if you like. If not that is fine just wanted to make you aware I always welcome that from my readers. Really enjoyed your work. Keep writing and sharing.......sincerely, Melissa Lundeen.