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The Kiss
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Erotic I feel your tongue
like ocean water
at the end of the day
a gentle lapping
against my heated lips
Your drunken trail
inebriates me
a slow burning rush
liquid and warm
caressing my insides
I ache for your taste
to mingle with mine
sweet and succulent
moist and hot
Your love flows in
and out of me
as you slide along
a bed of wet silk
drinking deeply
drawing my soul out
making me tremble
Electrical pulses
light up the night
Taking my breath
Stealing my heart
with just one kiss
lovely piece
phil-carcione@comcast.net
Oh, what a wonderful image of sensations you paint here with your words.
Almost seems like poetic erotica...very wonderful and romantic description...I always come off as some sort of manic-depressive and sentimental pornographer when I try to write like this...lol...anyway, it makes me yearn for that touch again, even if just momentarily...reminds of all those nights...a great piece!
all poetry is erotic and all
life begins with a kiss.
This is a great work it is more than eroticism – You have a lust feelings of the kiss that you have presented so well in this work. I loved the last part of it
drawing my soul out
making me tremble
Electrical pulses
light up the night
Taking my breath
Stealing my heart
with just one kiss
Cheers.
Ozjan
wow what a feeling ash
Much Love
Ashley
This one is too hot to touch!
LOL a kiss is not always just a kiss ! ohh baby, hot blood pumping/tounge wiggling -- mind blowing good L&P