Love Drunk/ Fuckin Faded

What do you see in me, because in you, i see everything i've ever wanted. But what is special about me, can you say, because i can tell you about magic. To you, what am i? Do i make you smile? When you think of me, do you stare for  awhile. Does time slow in my abscense? On what scale do i matter Love, do i out weigh the world or do i barely measure up to a dollar? Do you need it all or just my hand. Forgive me, im trying to understand. Im drunk off this love. i cant see stright. This love is all ive been feeling, so tell me love, am i sacred or treasured. I just want to know if im at the top of the mountain or on a cliff. I cant see stright. I cant see a thing, but i feel this.

fuckin faded

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sy75's picture

yeah im feelin the vibe of

yeah im feelin the vibe of that one a good read. there were a couple of spelling errors but could understand what you was writing and putting across.

thankyou for sharing your work

allets's picture


She loves me, she loves me sometimes, she loves me...okay. I write in word processing "Microsoft Word" and run it through the spell checker - I spell okay, but you can't see it sometimes - straight/dollar/I've/I/% - meaning gets scattered and your meanings are so wonderfully crafted and ideated. Write more on other subjects..learn to spell great in Word check spelling and copy into pp ;D - Read lots of pp poets and write-on! ~~A~~