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How Sweet
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Forward From The Transcendence Lost in translation,
because my heart cant take it.
Forbidden words penertrate my
matrix.
My world,
its crumbling.
My blood is bubbling.
i never saw it coming
like the end, suddently.
Like lighting, i was struck
suddently.
I took pain humbly,
and walk with,
faithfully,
like my god
patiently.
Foot, and foot.
loving every step further.
Loving every thorn
and every other.
Everyone it gets sweeter
than the last.
Till you realize nothing hurts,
it just contrasts,
between sweetner and suger.
Nice Outlook
I like this one. More balanced line by line, beginning to conclusion. Cool last line. You are growing as a writer. Bravo! ~A~