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The Devil In Me
Dance with the devil and devil may care
Astride the stallion of tortured pride
Defeat the misery of inner sleep
Kicking out with a tattered soul
Torn out the energy on this eclectic rider's back
It's time to counter attack.
Whizzing round I hear your sound
The breath of lust
I was wrong to trust
So silent and aware
You stand there violent in despair
I'm something other than what they see
The tree of life begins and ends with me
I harness myself with insecurity
Within a strong voice lives a scary place,they seem so desperate to embrace
His pools of melted chocolate bittersweet
Evoke the madness in me
A laugh souless that holds no joy
Waiting yet to be taken into your employ
I paint with deceptive words, I maim with prose
I deliberate, then take my pose
Astounding vision,Elaborated silence
Pretend to be something
Emulate the silence.
Dance with the devil and devil may care
But
We
Know
He
May
Not
It's up to you,What choice have you got?
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WONDERFUL MASTERPIECE! you shall be an FAMOUS ARTIST ONE DAY! i WISH you LUCK on that!!
Pretend to be something
Emulate the silence
striking lines.................sometimes things just jump out
nice work.................thought provoking and full of feeling
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joe
Hi. Me again!
I like the internal rhyme scheme. It adds so much to this. In a sense in displays the meanings, hidden within the words, hidden within the woman.
My thoughts are of illusion, desperate and convincing illusion, but desirous none-the-less.
Yet, wonder seeps beneath the closed lids of fixated mind with a query and its answer, both deeper than the beauty and sensuality.
Who are you? Just let me in, for I wish to know.
Well, no one can ever accuse you of writing anything boring.
I like this place. It allows for a special freedom not always available within the open forums of EZBoard.
I would always want the dance. :) Tim
"Astride the stallion of tortured pride"
Ohhh I adore this line!! It's EXACTLY where I'm at right now and you found words for it!! Doesn't surprise me. You've always been in my soul!!
Great stuff here, Gabster!!! :)